1. What is my thesis?
There should be a ban on television advertisements aimed at children.
2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?
I am using a result of experiment, and a quotation from a professor.
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My argument has a experimental consequence so I think it has logical evidence. However, I may need some more different experimental results to reinforce my thesis.
My Confirmation
First, we should check the influences of advertisements on children. Thomas Robinson, a professor of pediatrics at Stanford University and Lucile Packard Children's Hospital, adverted that “even a 30-second exposure to a novel product, one that you have never seen before, changes their preferences for brand.” after his experiments with preschoolers.
For example, Stanford University's associate professor of pediatrics, Dr. Tom N. Robinson provided two portions of identical food sets to children who were 3- to 5-year-old which one was wrapped with McDonald's and the other was ordinary one and asked them to choose more delicious one. The result was that most of them said the set which was wrapped McDonald's tasted better.
Like this, advertisements can inculcate wrong impression on children and emphasize values on brand name and materialistic joys.
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